Cut the antithesis density on the organisation landing page - #2
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`profile/README.md` carried six `rather than` figures and one `X, not Y` in 802
words, 8.7 antitheses per 1000, and that density is the tell the fleet text
survey measures. This is the most visible page the organisation has, so a
reader meets the figure before they meet the product.
Four sites are rewritten and two `rather than` figures are kept, the two where
the contrast is the information: the design case against the error case, and a
preset per deficiency against one blanket mode. The group of three that opened
the page is extended to four, so each image now stands for one row of the speed
table below it.
git grep -cF 'rather than' -- profile/README.md
profile/README.md:2
Nothing else moves: no em dash and no en dash enters the file, measured with
`git grep -nP '\x{2014}'` and `\x{2013}`, both silent before and after.
Answers operations issue 896.
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SUPERSEDED BY PULL REQUEST 3, AND CLOSED WITHOUT MERGING.
This head carries the intended change and one defect: its commit has no DCO
sign-off, so
Verify DCO sign-off on every commitrefused it, naming the exacttrailer it wanted. A trailer cannot be added to a pushed commit without
rewriting it, and I do not force-push, so the same tree was committed again with
-sondoc/896-profile-readme-antithesis-dcoand sent as pull request 3.The two heads hold the same bytes:
Read pull request 3 for what the change does and what it leaves undone. Nothing
here is merged and nothing here is lost.