docs(examples): add a readable walkthrough of the public demo - #41
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Closes #40. The repository had no way to see what the demo does without leaving it: the hosted demo and the video both cost minutes and both live elsewhere. examples/demo-transcript.md writes the loop out, so it reads in about a minute with no install, no account and no key. scripts/check-tracked-tree.mjs is an allowlist, so examples joins ALLOWED_DIRS in the same commit. Verified: gate:tree clean over 176 tracked files, and the check's own controls still pass.
📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe PR adds a public demo transcript that covers incident response, voice authorization, evidence checks, rollback, rota behavior, and telephone limitations. It also permits the ChangesPublic demo documentation
Priority: ⬇️ Low Estimated code review effort: 1 (Trivial) | ~5 minutes Change: Other · Severity of issue fixed: Low Merge Risk: 🔵 Low · up to The implementation is unaffected, but the public walkthrough should be corrected before merge so readers are not misled about alert delivery or telephone availability. 🚥 Pre-merge checks | ✅ 4✅ Passed checks (4 passed)
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Both were found in review and both are right. The Break dockside control does not post through the HTTP intake endpoint. src/demo/service.ts lines 76 to 81 say why: the intake needs its token and the control has to work for a stranger with no credentials, so the demo service raises its alert straight into the orchestrator. The walkthrough now says that, and says outright that intake authentication, rate limiting and payload validation are not what it exercises. The provider's refusal was scoped to the setup Ringbolt reported, not to the country. docs/two-way-audio.md lines 136 to 138 quote the sentence, line 141 records that their published region table still lists the destination, and line 172 calls it one observation and not a rule about their API. The walkthrough now carries the same scope instead of a categorical claim.
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In `@examples/demo-transcript.md`:
- Around line 25-26: Update the `/demo` transcript description to state that the
break alert invokes the orchestrator directly rather than sending through the
HTTP intake endpoint, while preserving that it follows the same orchestration
flow as monitor alerts.
- Around line 52-54: Update the transcript wording around the Netherlands
dialing statement to qualify it as applying to the documented or tested setup,
rather than claiming the provider categorically or permanently cannot dial the
Netherlands; preserve the references to docs/two-way-audio.md and the associated
call IDs.
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Two gaps on the repository's first screen. The opening sentence never said what kind of thing Ringbolt is. "Phone-call agent for on-call engineering" is the category a reader is scanning for, and it costs one clause. The new examples/demo-transcript.md was reachable only from the file tree, so the first screenful now offers all three ways in: run it, watch it, or read it.
The README's first screen had no image at all, so the repository landing view was a wall of text. docs/media/card.png is the same card the video opens on, and it now sits above the title with the tagline as its alt text. The deck's page carried a title and a description and no Open Graph tags, so pasting the address anywhere that unfurls links produced a bare URL. It now carries og:type, og:title, og:description, og:image and og:image:alt, plus twitter:card for a large preview. The image is served from the site itself at /card.png, which the build copies out of src/ui/public, so the preview does not depend on any other host. Verified: npm run build then npm run gate, exit 0 on all seven steps, with the size gate unmoved because it watches dist/client/assets and a public file lands at dist/client. The tracked-tree gate reads clean at 178.
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Closes #40.
What this adds
examples/demo-transcript.md, the walkthrough of the public demo written out. A reader who doesnot want to open the hosted demo or watch the video can now read the whole loop in about a minute,
inside the repository, with no install, no account and no key: a release breaks, policy decides it
is worth waking somebody, the call goes out, the spoken authorization is checked against the
transcript before anything runs, the rollback runs, and a second call is refused outright because
the responder was never heard.
The README's first screenful now offers all three ways in (run it, watch it, read it) and its
opening sentence names the category, "a phone-call agent for on-call engineering", which it never
did. A reader scanning the first screen was left to infer what kind of thing this is.
It also opens on
docs/media/card.png, the card the video opens on, with the tagline as its alttext. The landing view had no image at all.
src/ui/index.htmlgains Open Graph and Twitter card tags. The page carried a title and adescription and nothing else, so pasting the address anywhere that unfurls links produced a bare
URL. The preview image is served from the site itself at
/card.png, copied out ofsrc/ui/publicby the build, so the preview depends on no other host. These reach the live pageonly on the next deploy, which is not part of this pull request.
Why the gate file changes too
scripts/check-tracked-tree.mjsis an allowlist, not a denylist, so any new top-level directoryfails
gate:treeuntil it is named there.examplesjoinsALLOWED_DIRSin the same commit, whichis the friction that file documents as deliberate.
Review findings, both fixed in
7e57f0bTwo bots independently found the same two overclaims in the first draft of the walkthrough, and
both were right:
not.
src/demo/service.tslines 76 to 81 say the demo service raises its alert straight into theorchestrator because the intake needs a token and the control has to work for a stranger with no
credentials. The file now says that, and says intake authentication, rate limiting and payload
validation are therefore not what it exercises.
wide.
docs/two-way-audio.mdlines 136 to 138 scope the refusal to the reported call setup, line141 records that their region table still lists the destination, and line 172 calls it one
observation and not a rule about their API. The file now carries that scope.
Verification
node scripts/check-tracked-tree.mjsreadsclean (176 tracked).node scripts/check-tracked-tree.mjs --selfteststill passes all three controls, so the gate thatjust accepted a new directory is still able to refuse one.
npm teston this branch: 555 passed across 33 files.npm run buildthennpm run gate: exit 0 on all seven steps. The size gate is unmoved, becauseit watches
dist/client/assetsand a public file lands atdist/client.card.pngis present indist/clientafter the build, so/card.pngwill serve once deployed.than against the draft it came from.
Scope
Documentation and one allowlist line. No behaviour changes.